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A Single Darkened Rose

I'll give you a rose
to show my affection.
A single rose as red as my blood.
To show all my love.

This rose comes from my heart
it shows we'll never be apart
forever you have way into
my heart

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  • Superb sparkles of emotion coming from this piece very well written. My first impression was a good one I enjoyed reading your poem filled my heart with Joy and love. Talented take care