There were channels of my soul
~ blocked
with outward dismay
and I'd slip through each moment
alone
until I chose to lie down in blackness of night;
where this gypsy heart sang
to the moon's eye
taking me far from here...
Author notes
Prompt: emptiness gives more room to dream
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #57 by Kuranya.
700 points, ended March 15, 2009, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah yes, the wondering spirit, I know it well.
A fine penning and congrats on the shiny thingy.
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Now this is more like it, there was a freedom in this I was searching for. lovely poem. Best to you in the contest
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excellent
Enjoyed the read
You did perfect with the prompt
Best of luck in the contest
Do come see me when ya ge the chance
Susan~~~
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