The dreams
fill my head,
then burst and
drip down my body,
then again explode
in my thoughts. The deep,
intense, craving to fly away.
Author notes
25 words of my absolute, insaine want and craving to be able to jump into the air, and fly away.
A contest entry
- 25 words of Craving by misticmoonlite.
725 points, ended March 2, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think, what should I change, what should I keep, what do you like, what do you hate?
Comments
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Very nice write. Your words are perfect for your picture.
Best of luck in the contest.
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you can be an Eagle and be free spirited, lol...we all have these thoughts at times...nice entry, good luck
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