Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Sanctuary

I sit beneath the whispering pines
when Helios seeks horizon's bed,
and watch the lengthening shadows crawl,
seduced to merge with coming night.
This hour, is when sweet solace sighs,
and I find sanctuary at last.



A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Wandika gold member
    March 1, 2009
    Edit | Reply

    Yes

    I believe that.
    Quiet, some red wine,
    and used to be with your dogs.


  • Tirrell
    March 1, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful sentiments, I love the imagery here.
    The last line is my favorite part as well.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 28, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    Need I say this was tremendous. "when Helios seeks horizon's bed".....This line was the power in the write.....