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Something tired...

Leave me to rest...

I ache for no reason.
My bones have melted my muscles are dust...
I'll blink and breathe if I must.

Lethargic? Perhaps... Certainly... Definitely...

I am wasting.

It aches to think it hurts to conjure, to try and...

oh...

I give up.

I'm too tired, too...

I'm...

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I am a student of sloth... we know each other well.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    March 3

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    Judged

    Too tired to even finish the piece.
    This is excellent. It shows lethargy and age and aching very well.

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
    Shari