Nothing ever works out right
nothing ever stops the fights
and I wish I could calm my fears tonight,
only if I could be loved by you.
I can't see your tears,
but I can feel your fears
and they burn into me
they burn into me
Can't you believe me?
or will you decive me?
again I will cry
all alone,
surrounded by nothing
Author notes
I dont like it....I dont know
Im sorry if this isnt very good...Please be nice...=)
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isnt very good?? this is amazing! seriously! i love the lines "i cant see your tears but i can feel your fears and they burn into me they burn into me." that was absolutly beautiful. :]
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lol, why thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it
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Very good
sad but great, Keep writing.
Tash.
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You sound so desperate. I think this is good.
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