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Confusion

I told you last night that with out you I would be lost
this morning I woke up and I realized just what holding on would cost
and I've called to say
that it cant go on this way

Sittin on my bed this afternoon
I decided there are no lost causes
just people that give up too soon
and I just had to tell you
I wont ever give up on you if you need me not to
but somethings got to change
We're not being fair
and the confusion is getting to be too much to bare

I can be strong if you need me to
but I need you to tell me what Im suposed to do
I'll stand back and let you make you're own space
but I can't be in the middle like this
Its not my place

I'm not really sure how to make this right
I dont ever want to have to fight
but If you were to tell me I should
I would

I guess the bottom line
is you need to decide
who you are and who you want to be
The decision is yours not mine
and thats all I have to say
because something has to change either way

what Im telling you is Im through messing around
I'm not sure where I stand
but I need to get my feet on solid ground
and now that I've said what I needed to say
If its what you want Ill go away.

now its all up to you
just tell me what I should do

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  • TheDayTimeStopped
    March 1, 2009
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    this is amazing. i would talk to him. he's worth fightin for manda. i think the other ones(please please dont be pissed at me for saying this) are assholes and pervs. he's not. all i have to say is figure out where you stand. no guy is worth losin yourself for tho. remember that. wow i sound like a fortune cookie lol


  • missbehaved angel
    February 28, 2009

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    wow... i like it. i think you should let him read it. its the honest truth and thats what both of you need right now. but yeah its really good. well written as usual.


    • Betting Roses
      February 28, 2009
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      idk.. maybe I will... I started the convo and its goin in the wrong direction... but its progress I guess... yea idk I just wrote this earlier while I waitin to set the table lol...thanks.... check the lastest one i wrote it while I was sittin on the barn floor losing it.


      • missbehaved angel
        February 28, 2009
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        yeah i think you should. just oosssaaa. yeah it is. lol nice. yep no problem. i did

        • Betting Roses
          February 28, 2009
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          yea maybe Ill show him both... idk... OOOOOOOUUUUUSAAAAAAAA... yea

          • missbehaved angel
            February 28, 2009
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            yea you should!! good girl now take deep breaths but dont hyperventalate. ok?


            • Betting Roses
              February 28, 2009
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              yea... Ill print em monday i guess... i keep giggling for no reason but im still upset. I wont hyperventalate.... YOU TOOO


              • missbehaved angel
                February 28, 2009
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                yeah good idea. lol meeeeeeeeee toooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! ok good. ahh mooooom but its fun to hyperventalate!!! ok ill try!...kinda...sorta...maybe...not really...but ill try.


                • Betting Roses
                  February 28, 2009
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                  yea... thats scary... lol yeaaaaaa... ok... yea it is lol..... TRY HARDER.... and dont choke on the drool on the window pls

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