She lays there on
the floor razor upon
her scarlet wrist. Gun
by her side. She slowly
slides that razor across
her blood stained arm.
She cries as she
picks the gun up.
Slowly putting the
gun to her it to her
head. She rests
her finger on the
trigger and her
hand quivers.
"Goodbye and I'm
Sorry" she whispers.
As she pulls the trigger.
Tears still falling. Her
lifeless body hits the
floor. One tear stains
her cheek. As for that
was her last tear to fall
Author notes
This is exactly how I feel sadly
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This is simply amazing. I love this... Its extreaml;y touching.. Sad yet has many emotions.
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That's despressing. And chilling. I'm still trying to shake the shivers off my spine. Creepy but good. Very good. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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Deeply emotional write with painful images..
yet expressed beautifully- a darkness.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Awh that's so sad. I'm sorry you feel that way and hopefully things'll get better for you. Congrats on the gold trophy.
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very good, everyting i asked for, thankyou
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wow thats how i feel aswell
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I see the depression as I once felt these emotions, this is full of imagery, and words flow with ease... I will leave this one in the contest... I hope writing is a outlet for you as it was me until the pain passes like the moments in your words this too shall pass really push on thank you for entering
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