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Volcano Offerings


Trying to gather my thoughts
and all you members of my family
crying out for me to do this or that.

I have had enough.. Do you hear me?
ENOUGH !!!!!!!


I am going to write your names
on these stones I found.



Each mark is how often you
have in your harshness hurt me.
Into a bag they will go.
When your name is drawn,
no matter where you are,
into the volcano you will be toss.



Until, finally, I might have
some peace and quiet..
some time to just be me
and not feel like I have to jump
to take care of all the troubles of the world.






Author notes

So does your family and friends drive you nuts
and you cant take their crap anymore,
now is your time to get rid of them once a for all...

Throw them into a Volcano then run like heck
and pray their life insurance policy has not ran out
because you know they are worth more dead then alive.

Or any other way that you can get rid of them.

No more then 20 lines or I will push you into the Volcano

pictures can be found here
http://ferdyonfilms.com/2008/05/

and without saying names
I did this in only 18 lines..
I am so proud of myself

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 1

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    Yes I love this we all want some peace and quiet and to live a life that is just for us and not for others thanks for your entry into my contest be well.