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Broken

    I know this is not the answer

     this scars will last for ever

          but this pain will go

           jet still i do it again

 

        every thing feels so fake

              people are fake

          they say they love me

              jet still they let go

  

                     BLEED

               i bleed to feel

                this insanity

              this depression

this concussion that is affecting my head

it hurts and don't wanna go away

 

every time i feel alone,hurt,depress

                       Broken

          broken i am broken inside

                 i am still cutting

                        i hate it

                        i love it

                     can't let go

 

     this is my way to let you know

      to show you that i am hurting

   that you and every thing hurts me

              cant you see now

           cant you feel my pain

 

   so many words that i can't say

    i cut and sprees then my way

 

              I want to feel free

              so i cut and bleed

 

                 Cant you see?

            please don't juge me

 

 

 

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  • the last line really shows the strength in this piece you do an amazing job in this with the emotion and pain that you are trying to express. great work