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I'm Hard To Understand.

What should you do when your heart feels broken?
There are so many words that have been unspoken.
I don’t get it, why cant I just be happy?
I’m always down, always feeling crappy.

I guess I can’t handle change so well.
I’m acting out, cant you tell?
It’s moving so fast, leaving me behind,
Why cant time just f*****g rewind?

I tried pretending like nothing is wrong,
Relying my happiness on some catchy song.
Hoping I wont cry or frown,
Yet I cry when no one’s around.

I try my best not to show how I feel.
Emotions I do conceal.
I’m hard to understand,
But it’s just how I planned.

Someday I’ll be filled with bliss.
Not completely happy, but its better than this.
This feeling has me so tired,
I believe someday my heart will get what it most desired.

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