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As The Music Sways

I hear the loud whisper of the music as I
move my body along; swinging my sword so I
appear to be doing a dance.
My body feels tense and cold from the exhaustion.
But it all is invigorating to me even when I grew
more tired.
The feel of my heart beat my chest as it danced to the music,
and the irritation of how human I felt when I grew tired.

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  • theprotigy999
    February 28

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    mysterious

    i liked this one alot. the arrangement kinda made me feel like i was in bed after swimming in the ocean all day. nice effect

    Blessings and Luck,
    Matt