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Passage of Time


~ ♥ ~

As man walks through
the pathways before him,
he's forever grounded
with his feet
but soars with his mind.

~ ♥ ~

Walls of white
governs his path
blue skies above
as he sees
his future unfold.

~ ♥ ~

Nothing is hidden
from him
for he is man
and walks
through time itself.

~ ♥ ~

Author notes

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  • beautifully written,
    this is a truly excellent poem.
    fantastic description and gorgeous imagery, i especially love the second stanza. a well deserved gold, congrats!

    ElectricBloom

  • this was a great poem i think you did a wonderful job with the picture


  • hawkeslake gold member
    February 28

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    Wow! What a perfect description of the man in the picture! As surreal as the painting. The more I read, the more I like your work. Well-done, my friend. Lita


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    February 28
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    loved your words....! Best ofluck.....!


    Becca

  • Very beautiful, I love your inspiring take.

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