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Silent Panther

How soon will it be before our lips merge with lipstick smudging
Mascara running from tear filled eyes?
How soon will it be that crushed velvet basque lays quietly upon the floor?
Clothes peeled and strewn in random precision
High heeled stilletos glistening in candlelights soft glow.
On a bed of satin
Black as night soft and sensual.
Hands that glide slowly carressing pallid flesh.
Tongues tingling with sensual delight.
I let loose her long black hair and caress and smell the sweet perfume
She moves like a silent panther
Hands snaking over my trembling body
I nuzzle her neck with kisses of delectable softness
Teeth marks like a bead of pearls adorn her slender neck.
She trembles as our bodies move as one
Her treasure rubbing gently on mine
Exstatic exultation as we reach the heights of love
She gasps her whole body shudders with such intensity
I hold her close and enfold her in my arms...

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  • Just Venting
    June 16
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    Oooh, love it! It's very sensual, and it entranced me. I definitely like this poem!


  • BluRosePoet8488
    June 2

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    It's a very sensual, poetically written poem that does steam the senses and leaves you desiring more. Very well written. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • Knight70 silver member
    June 2

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    This was HOT!

    Congratulations on the bronze! I loved the ignited passion in this. Your word choices were very strong, and the visual was tantalizing, to say the least. Very well done!


  • Juggalette Sammy
    June 2
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    May I say that you did an excellent job! I loved this. It flowed with sensuality, and the essence of it's imagery lingers in my head. Whew. It was certainly sexy and hot enough for this contest. It had a classy taste, but yet it was dirty enough to steam up my senses!

    Thanks for entering, and good luck!


  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    May 10
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    thank you for entering and good luck int he contest. your poem had excellent metaphorical meaning.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    March 24

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    tasty creative write i enjoyed this a whole lot i must say good luck to you in the contest {{soothing rie }}


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 14

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    sensual and erotic. raunchy use of imagery. i could picture this scene very clearly. well done and thanks for entering this contest with such a magical piece

    emmyb


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 14
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    a hot sensual piece, good luck in the contest


  • slipperssun gold member
    March 14

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    this is a very sensual write with the words arousing the reader with sensuality... wish you all the best in the contest
    cheers
    Jen


  • Fey Absinthe
    March 1

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    **ecstatic

    other than that.....this peice was magnificent!!! a perfect example of the simpliest erotic. so simple yet so powerful

    thank you and good luck my lovely

  • LovingPhoenix
    March 1
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    Powerful as always, poet! Excellent imagery, felt like I was in the room!

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