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when the moon becomes red

when the moon becomes red,
what will you do?
start pacing back and forth cause the payments due,
how could you turn away,
let them drown in that bay,
take back what you said,
cause you know you the reason why there dead,
*twitch twitch* theres no going back now,
you agreed when you took that vow,
what will you do when there calling,
what will you do?! now your stalling!


what will you do when the moon turns red?
think fast or itz off with your head!

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  • journey777
    March 5
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    tell me wat ya think pplz