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Fur soft and sleek
orange orbs hidden
night time danger.
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Pretator on prowl
victim beware
teeth tears flesh.
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Tongue cleans self
as eyes keep watch,
soft purrs heard.
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Moment of fullfillness
curls into a ball
eyes now resting.
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Ears ever listening
twitching at times
never a dull moment.
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Could you say no,
to owning a kitten
for your own pet?
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Author notes
Rules:
64 words maximum.
put the prompt in your AN.
The usual common sense rules
4. cats and under 64 words
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Comments
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Really loved this -- "felt" like a cat walking, those soft padded short steps -- never a wasted movement, just as you have no wasted words. I enjoyed how each phrase has intensity and meaning, and of course, the answer to the last stanza, is "of course not" -- I have two!
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I have seven cats in my home. For I love cats, I have a black one with orange eyes, a white fluffy one with silver eyes, two white calicos with green eyes, a silver point simese with blue eyes, a fluffy orange longhair, and of course a torquise shell.
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Amazing -- I'm a bit jealous, all that fluffy love!!
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Delightful!
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