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Drifting Away

swim through the massive ocean
the walls of concrete blocking a way
one lost dream
a civiliation lost
misery carried away
on a piece of slate
soap scum and harden planks of wood
given in to the beaten souls
burtal lives wasted
on a crumb of peace and rebellion
turn the page
words blurred
a story demolished
a journey crumbled before the eyes of gulit
tears are nothing more
than a mear cry for help
the darkened sky
and mocking mirrors
shattered them all
the destorted reflection of the monster inside
nothing left but the glass covered floor
the victim reaching out for help
denied the access he deserves
the helpess encounters
to retreve a helpless stone

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