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breakbrokebroken.

A hurried expression lives on
the creases of his face
I only wanted him to think upon my emotions
before my bones cracked.

My limbs work freely,
each with a separate nervous system;
one hand will reach for him,
while the other grabs a gun.

Each finger breaks as it hits
a polar magnet near his wrist

ninety degress of open flesh.

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1/23/09

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  • ZachofDoom
    March 2
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    it wont let me applaud without a body... oops

  • ZachofDoom
    March 2
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    dude, you've been a ghost. Talk to me, eh?


    • Nuclear
      March 2
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      I've been hurt. Again.
      Simple as that. However, I am taking measures to fix it.


  • Fireworks
    March 2
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    I only hope that one day you'll see what you truly deserve.


    • Nuclear
      March 2
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      Show me, love?

      Are you coming on Saturday? I'll need you.

      • Fireworks
        March 3
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        I'll come if I can.

        Mom says she expects us gone by Saturday... but she's said that the past couple of weeks already.

        If you need me, I'll do my best to be there.

      • Fireworks
        March 3
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        I would show you if I could.

        But I never deserved you, either.




        Did you ever know you had my heart in the palm of your hands?

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