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The Park

Dew rests on the soft grass.
Shadows blend with the serene air.
Pine needles seem to float on the green grass layer.
Here and now a maple leaf looks up to the trees from it's view point on the ground.
Branches shade the picnic tables.
The wind brushes quietly, gently past bushes.
A single drop of sweat falls from the air.
The minutes are gone.
Peace has returned.

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    March 1

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    This sounds like

    a really nice day in the park! Thanks for the visit you brought me. This is very visual & peaceful. I needed this cutie pie! You look to be a darling girl & I'm glad you're here at AP & I trust you'll enjoy yourself & learn much!


    • theVIP
      March 30
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      thanx so much for all your support. I mean it