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Ranting

What's the point in giving life,
when that life is marked by sadness,
and financial woe before it even begins?
Why bother to spread a legacy of
doubt to the next generation?
If times are hard before
conception, afterwards
can only get worse.
Stop and think before you
give someone life,
can you take care of them?

Sometimes i think what was
the point of making me,
without proper financial care.
Most times I feel lesser than
my peers.
Most times worry overwhelmes
my heart.
Don't critisize
my stern sense of humor,
my overwhelmed mind, and
my insecurities.
i am the product
of what you established for me?

Author notes

Just a random angry rant......The Mom is insisting that I relax. She doesn't understand my struggles because for the most part she was wealthy at my age. I guess she didn't feel like I deserved the same oppurtunities in life. i could be a really happy, fun person. i am my mother's daughter.

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  • MiniChiken
    November 18
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    Very nicely done, sometimes I feel like this but then I decide that no one can decide what I am going to do with my life...


  • tellnotalesxx
    March 1

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    W0AH ii CAN FEEL THE ANGER iiN THiiS. YOU DiiD A GREAT J0B iiN SPiiLLiiNG iiT ALL OUT. KEEP UP THE GREAT W0RKKK ^^)
    -MELiiJELii