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Never After

She was never mine
and never yours.

You're too naive-
you actually thought
that she could be yours.
Never took the quantitative data
into play
so your calculations were wrong.

I never, though,
for one second
really believed in she and I.
I've years on you
and experiences more
and I've walked down this road before.

I built up the walls
and crawled into the bomb shelter
so when the bomb struck
I remained mostly whole,
but you,
you didn't
neither of you did

and so I walked amongst the ruined streets
picking up pieces and mementos
and every little thing
that reminded me of her.

Because of you
she'll live happily never after.

Aren't you glad for completing her fairytale?

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On suicide and a love triangle, two weak and one strong.

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  • DeadlyTurnip
    February 28, 2009
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    Wonder what this is about.

    it's good