You're more than arms length from me
And I am working on fixing that
And no i won't care
If your IQ is higher
Than your bedroom skills
We'll just go for the classiest of thrills
I'm so glad i can only remember a single instance
Of a dying flame that almost wasn't us
O am currently swept up in my admiration for you
Caused by lack of sleep
And an abundance of thrills
Jump-started conversations with higher ranks and newbies
Glory to God in the highest
I shout this
Cause i mean it
Could your lips lock with mine
Set my mind ablaze
If not i'll just have to wish it
I love you like any 19 year old can
With limits and respect for future your future plans
I'm so glad you took me
So glad you fed this starving heart
Your quiet and rambunctious
But at times can be reserved for social fauxpas or romantic at times
Your thoughts come sporadically from the unconscious outcomes
And your saccharine grin
Your quick at biting my toung by showing me
What i've done wrong
Its strange how quiet things are when you are sleeping not talking to me
And this song I am writing
I imagine singing
With a piano just to my left
With a subtle breeze
And a nice flashy suit
Like you're watching me
Author notes
I am in the army, I wrote this on a CQ shift and sent it to my girl friend, from what I remembered it was very good. But now looking at it, it don't make much sense to me.
Reguardless hope your like it.
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A contest entry
- the Passion Of Love...(contest for lovers) by poet2angels.
875 points, ended March 2, 2009, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love how you expressed your feelings for her ands you seem to know her very well

Ty for entering and good luck!
Lynda

