Please

I pretended not to care

Letting you do your thing

Hoping that you would

Finally see how I felt

Thinking that you would

Need me just this once

But you left me standing

With a broken heart

You don't even know that

I'm sitting here wishing with

All my might that you would

Come back and just stay

Author notes

Word prompt by Christinaaaaa by Lonely Christina. 650 points, ended March 9, 13 entries
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The.poet.of.hearts
April 8

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it was alright
not much
simple and suitable wording

by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
LonelyWolf Tasagka
March 7

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Such a raw prose of heartbreak, really deep, the emotion was like a river. Great write!

Sincerely,
LonelyWolf Tasagka
- tears.of.silence
  March 7
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  thank you
butterflygrl
March 4

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i love it, i can say been there and thought that....
he still hasent come back.... everything happens for a reason....
- tears.of.silence
  March 4
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  thank you.. you are most definitely correct.
Lonely Christina
February 28
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wow i love this. finalist list 4 sure!~
- tears.of.silence
  February 28
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  thank you
- - Lonely Christina
    February 28
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    ur welcome