Dusk
calm is the ocean
waves steady with time
clouds grey and hanging
drift wood poising in the sand
another day passing by
till tomorrow sun rises
still is the sound....
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pruedence
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Lovely feeling of peace in this - peace in knowing that life goes on, continues in the same vein day after day.
Nicely done.
thank you for your entry
best wishes in the contest
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short, a soft read, yet it lingers in the mind of the reader, it has a heartfelt touch of sadness as well.. a wonderfully written piece that has a lot to express, thank you very much for sharing. I wish you luck in the competition.
Lillian
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Beautiful yet powerful sadness resonates in your verse ...excellent poet
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so few words, yet such a vivid picture. i wish you well in this contest that you have entered and am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie
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there is a sense of gloomy tranquillity here that I really like, a real atmosphere.
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