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Love is....Skin

Words on skin
Instead of parchment
Have the same meaning
If not a little more
Personal
Love that knows no bounds
That does not mock or
Is easily angered
So many virtues
Yet the greatest is Love
A love so deep that it is now
Skin deep
The greatest words of love
Created in skin art
A beauty to behold
A treasure for always
A blessing to the owner
And any who may see it
This is truly blessed skin
To have the Word of God
Placed upon it; not just
Words on skin, but
God’s Word

Author notes

Tattoo ~ http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/rickie83/More%20Images/Lovey%20Dovey%20Stuff/nowTHATisit.jpg

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  • individuality gold member
    March 15

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    artistic desgin, a blank canvas for brush strokes of faith, of anything desired really, it's crazy, everytime i read a poem i think oh where's that poem of mine, lol they are swimming in folders.


    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 15
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      you and your folders! If you ever got all of your work in one place it would fill many computers I'm sure! Thank you for reading this piece, I enjoyed writing it from the picture prompt in my AN. You are a wonder my dear button friend!
      Button kisses
      Lily ♥

  • nice

    i love the feel of the poem. Gods word is the most important on love. Your poem is great a real treat to read. thank you

    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 1
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      Thanks for such a nice comment Lactar. I agree, God's Word is very important on many subjects but especially on Love. Did you check out the link in my Authors Notes to see the pic that inspired the write? IF not you should! That's where I got the inspiration for this piece. Thanks again for the read and the comment!

  • This is truly a beautiful poem my dearest lilly. It has touched my heart. Thank you for sharing this.

    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 1
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      Grimm, Thank you for reading and commenting on this piece. Did you get a chance to view the link in my Author's Notes? IF not you may want to go back and check it out as it was that image that inspired this piece. Thanks again for your nice comment.


  • Broken-Rickie
    February 28

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    I really like this. I'm not into religion, but I do believe in that verse and I have thought about getting a tattoo similar to that. I like what you did with this prompt. Most people frown upon such tattoos. I'm glad you didn't take this in a negative way. I also like how you described it. Skin deep with God's Word. I think this is an amazing write. Thank you for entering and good luck...

    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 1
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      Thank you for taking the time to read this and comment. I know you aren't into religion but this is how it came to me so I had to write what was in my heart. THank you for hosting the contest.

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