Why do I bare these tags?
When I’m afraid to be
The person that I am
Afraid to be me
He still hangs over me
Like the memory I can’t shake
Killing me slowly and softly
With as much force as I can take
Never open to the truth
Instead he swims in lies
Too hard-headed to understand
My horror and my cries
Wishing I could kill him
Not wanting to cause him harm
He’s way to strong and witty
With way to much charm
So instead I wear his dog tags
And keep the memory of his past
Not worth the time, pain and freedom
So I’ll kill him dead to last
What did you think
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yea... i'd kill *HER* but i don't want to harm her. i know how you feel. the tags thing is creative.
i like this a lot.
kAsSiE
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I know its is DEFINITELY not my place to say, but I'm sorry about your relationship with your father. I know what it's like to have unresolved feelings about a parent. It seems like the appealing, charming people can be someone else entirely. You seemd to really bare your soul in this, it was touching.
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aww... *hugs* i loved this poem so much sadness yet there is some hope
really good Shaant
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wow, this is like really cool, i love it, it shows a lot of emothions, itss really great
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awe this is well written... really well written, but sad... kind of depressing
but still good I'll just block out what its actually about lol 
not that that helps any :/
Loves!!
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This is a really great write. wow......i have no words. lol
keep it up though!!! Its good to get emtions out.
kaycee
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wow. thats all i can say.
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I love the write but...
*stabs him*
why do you still have his tags? -
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because they're my dad's
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this has a very good flow to it, and emotion, there seems to be a struggle in it between what to do..and then the final blow. i like ths
Stephanie ♥
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