You
the one who abandoned me
why
do I think of you
now
I hope I wont regret
bringing these thoughts
from nothingness
I
had
everything I wanted
and you
came
and tore up my life.
Somewhere
I
love
you
but I dont know where
that is.
I hoped that
you would come back
I am your
daughter after all.
I guess that wasnt enough incentive...
but now I dont care
everytime
I try to contact you
you throw me
out of your life
maybe someday
you'll see that I loved you
but
i
dont love
you
anymore
Author notes
OKay. Here is where I come with a long story. As of now, I am 15, remember and my mother had me at a young age. My "sperm donor" as I call him now, never married my mother, and he left when I was 5. I called him for a while, and wrote him, and he never returned anything. I called him last year for father's day and he claimed he didnt want me to have his number. I Guess I really dont care anymore.
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awww... i know how you feel. my father was never around for me. the drugs always got the best of him. i remember that we had a fight and he basically disowned me. he called me again like 6 months later and i still hadnt completely forgiven him but i was ready to cuz i hadnt seen him for like a year and i missed him. then about 2 months later he died of an overdose alone in his appartment. i was mad at him for so long. i just wish i would have spent more time with my dad. well written poem. i think if it hurts you to have anything to do with him then you shouldnt. (thats the way my mom and i are) . but make sure you try because if you dont you may regret it.im sorry about ur situation.<3
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first off... that man is a jackass. he deserves to go to hell, which im quite sure he will. this was a very good poem though, when people think of heartbreak they mostly think of a girl or boy but... this add a different meaning to it. I am so sorry you have to experience so much pain. I liked the poem though. Thanks for entering my contest.
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That is a sorry ass man. I wouldnt want him to be my father. anyway the poem was very emotional and well written.
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Well. Thank you. I am glad that you liked the emotion...I was worried it didnt come out well. So thank you
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i know how this goes...im sorry you had to deal with this too... i really really loved how you singled out certain words..it just emphazied them and made this so strong
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Thank you. Your comment means alot
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This makes me sad. He is missing out on a wonderful daughter! You are awesome, he is scum. Not wanting you to have his number! Grrrr! I think a part of you will always love him, and that is ok, but he is totally missing you. I like this.
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this is such a good poem. I know what your going through, it sucks because its like you want to love him and you want him to care because it is your father but sometimes things just gont work out. but im sure you can make it through. hang in there. love your writing :]
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