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Light bouncing off every angle
should have been Beauty's joy
worldly eyes reflect exterior surfaces
always critical by default...

judging unique lines,
yet privately envying to acquire,
and devour

if it wasn't enough-

aspiring to become
instead of just being

final perceived value...

 

...assembly line.

 

 

 

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  • Sheli silver member
    February 28
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    AWESOME!

    altogether wondeful, i really liked the sudden intense impact the word 'devour' invoked