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How mortal we are

It really reminds you how mortal we all are
The phrase that echos through vacant halls afar
Not really knowing what's to come next
A plague
An Illness
That rips through the best

Let the golden boys stand
At the Alter in the clouds
Let the heaven bells keep ringing
Cos we're too way far down
Let the mountain creatures roar
To carry on the tune
As us mortals will all stand here
Howling at the moon

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  • Betting Roses
    March 1, 2009
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    Ill be back to read.


  • Fezichimo
    February 28, 2009
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    Great poem sums up a lot of feelings i think a lot of people are feeling at the moment.