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Left without a word

I had a nightmare
and I had died
without asking for help
without reaching out.
I wish I hadn't
because now I'm
waiting for disaster,
now im sure i am going crazy
i am sure
im going to leave
without leaving a
word

What do you think? Anything I can work on?

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  • Guerrero
    March 2
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    powerful ending..i love the way you singled the word "word" out and made that incredibly powerful