Juicy l'il Jericho
Smokey-hued scented skin
Enough to give a blind man sight
Side-show pony struts the streets
Muscled thighs painted glossy black
Rippled buttocks jutting jauntily
Through sausaged skirts
Tucked tightly
Streamlined hips lacking
Feminine rounds and lumps
'Hey baby, take a ride in my rental car'
'I'll be the best rock you ever rolled'
Author notes
- Nude furniture - custom made in Jericho
A contest entry
- notes from a bus ride by Suzanne Dia.
4375 points, ended March 11, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Best of the Best by Desdmona.
1400 points, ended April 1, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This made me a laugh a little because I liked the ending so much. It was slightly cheesy but very good. My favorite line was
"Smokey-hued scented skin
Enough to give a blind man sight"
This was well written and the diction was well chosen. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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love the attitude of this, and how you used the prompt.
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love your style....the flow and diction is great, i was able to get vivid snapshots from the imagery you presented through your words
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what the tiger said..
raw and real
this was just what I was looking for
you delivered.
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this take on this prompt blew my mind, i love what you have written here, it's so raw, and real, and just fantastic, just amazing, i'm at a loss for words, best of luck in the contest
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Wow. Thank you so much.
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you
i'm so glad you entered
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it's an awesome contest - great prompts - they taste like real life! (refreshing change)
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