I try to make it through life,
pretending im okay,
and theres you,
pretending along with me
I won't deny this,
and I can't fight this,
with you by my side,
i'll die
tonight.
Forgotten aspects
of bloody dimensions
within the inscisions
you've made,
if you were dead,
I'd cry
but i wouldn't care
if i'd had a choice
i'd die
right along with you
some doors
never close
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
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its totally true..some doors never close..i love your work..it captivates me
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Why thank you! i like this write especially. thanks for your comment!
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