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WAshed Up

Missing image

Beaches remnants by oceans spray

deep under the seas decays,wash and

bring ancient natures history to land

on our perfect sands so clean.

Peaceful sighs of waves collect so

much energy for us to breath in freely.

Washed Up and collectibles for our

flower beds at home in the deserts

so far from the shores.

 

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  • aboomer silver member
    March 14

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    Lovely wording and sentiments in this. I love the image of the 'debris' becoming collectibles for our flower beds - I do that A LOT....lolol
    thank you for your entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • KevinDunn
    March 2
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    Very interesting and economically expressed


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    February 28

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    This is a very beautiful poem. The picture fits the poem perfectly. I could picture for myself what you were writing about. I enjoyed the read!!


    • HopelessScribbles gold member
      February 28
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      Thank you for your sweet comment...he always has great contests, happy you saw what I enjoyed writing, I love nature and its beauty...
      MM


  • Denerica
    February 28

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    I have to admit, I wouldn't mind a piece of the driftwood myself, loved the description of the visual aspect. Blessings.


  • penman gold member
    February 28
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    Wonderful

    such a great take on the image. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest

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