fail
amongst the everglades
biting glare
I once knew you
once
but now you are gone
leaving me paraplegic,
pleading to the angel in you
to listen to my reasoning
just once more
(please)
I have no more false offerings
and my limbs are growing cold
A contest entry
- PIF: lucky dip [titles] :D by etoile.
950 points, ended April 13, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like this, your take on the prompt is great. I love all the imagery and the emotion in this is so strong and powerful. the opening stanza is very intriguing as well.
can you please put your ap name in your authors notes spaced out like this: s i d e r e a l
thanks.
goodluck and thanks for entering my contest
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Awh this is so sad
It really is.
Good luck in the contest
Shelly
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title 3 is: 'paralyzed senses'
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