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Precious Rachel

He pastors her emotions
to checkmate her desires

She dwells in melancholy clovers
in search of love

They're apparitional lovers
involved in matters of the heart

Subtle premonitions tell
a tale she can't excuse

Teardrops fall like liquid matter,
as her sensitivities get bruised

Take another look girl
the world in much bigger than that

Look inside your soul girl
and feel a lovely flowing brook

He's not your kind
though his body maybe divine

Abandon that elusive dream
come back to reality

Life yearns to embrace
your ability for affection

Turn away from fantasy
and you will see your destiny

waiting with open arms
to  love you like you deserve

Author notes

option eins:
"He's not your kind"
- Girl, You'll Be A Woman Soon, Urge Overkill

This poem is a dedication to all women
reminding them to love theirself.
Know that you're a precious gem
and deserve to be loved.

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  • notorious
    March 15
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  • snowbird600
    March 2
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    So Lovely! Thank you for the dedication!
    Good luck!
    Steffany


  • JinSays gold member
    February 28

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    wonderful.
    but Darell, my name's Jin
    Kidding, and there's a soft sweetness that's lovely here, funny and sexy too.
    I wish you all the best honey.
    Love,
    jin