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Another Pepsi Please





Pacing thoughts scramble,
forming patterns of syllables,
conjuring up caffeinated images
of emotional escape;
stimulating feather to exhaust dreams

into gasping moments
that finally release...

 

 

into sighs~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I should switch to decaff I think...lol
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Prompt: 3:00am

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  • Liquid memories
    February 28

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    yes, i would agree, get off of the coffee!
    Me, i do not drink the stuff,nerves steady, at least the last time i looked. lol.


  • Jersene gold member
    February 28

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    lol...this is cute. My husband loves pop...I call him a pop-aholic...lol


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 28

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    lol .....Here ya go....a double

    sorry no Pepsi icons
    Great poem, BFF!

    Lynda


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 28

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    Decaf is often needed...nicely creative and interesting in brevity...love the imagery and metaphor...closing line is perfect.

    Best,
    mystic


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 28

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    you better win something...I think yours is one of the best in this contest! lol great take on the prompt




  • Carolina Moon gold member
    February 28

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    A wonderfully *refreshing* read my friend. Maybe a little spike in the pepsi might help. Just kidding, as you said, maybe decaf would be the better option. lol Great stuff! Best of luck!

    Linda

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