Dripping,dropping out the sky
Water is seen everywhere.
Be careful not to waste it though.
If you do they'll be no more.
When taking a bath do not use a lot.
Please preserve it to save the world.
For if we don't ,we'll have no future.
The plants will die and rivers will be cleared.
The fish will die, and whales will be gone too.
If we saved water,droughts would be no problem.
Our town would be a healthier place.It would embrace
us in many ways.Days and days will pass.In each
we would be amazed.
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CONSERVE WATER!!!
lol this poem managed to hit me in more ways than one. I waste too much water especially when I take a bath. I usually take a bath for 1-2 hours lmfao. Thanks for reminding us freaks to conserve water and why we should. XD -
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thank you
Thank you,this is so reflective of the world today. A great write,good response to the prompt and it works so well.It was a joy to read,flowed well and is a worthy entry. Thank you. -
good poem
this is great -
this is a good messaqge to the world.
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Great messages in this little piece of art. Nice job here! Thanks for entering my contest and showing your work here. It's an honor to read it
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This is a wonderful poem..sharing awareness of water conservation.
Some great thoughts here... if we all do our bit, we really can make a difference, taking care of our world.
Congrats on your previous awards.
Very well done
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A great little write that reminds us all of the importance of Mother Earth's lifeblood, Water.
We do need to take care of it, and use it wisely.
This is a good poem and tells the story well. Good job and thank you for entering.
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like it. good job.
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Good job, poetry is the perfect way to raise awareness about the wasting of Earth's resources. good luck with the contest
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This has been very well written. Water is the most valuable thing on our planet. Nothing can survive without it and you have made people more aware how we need to be more careful.
LittleMoon
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Very well done. Good write. Lots of luck in the contest.
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This is good. Only thing is you did not follow rules, my da-nv-tli, (brother in Cherokee), asked for contestants to put their age and which option was chosen in the author notes. Fix this small detail and we might have a winner on our hands. Good luck in the contest.
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I 'm a great speller to.
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Sorry,I don't know howto put stuff in the author's notes but i'm (10 years old)
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hell yeah, im so there with you. I'm getting a water bucket on the weekend, mainly because i hate my water bills now i have a garden, but i like to save the environment too. this is great, really caught hold of my thoughts, well done x
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A very good write, I am very environmentally aware and I am glad to see a poem on water conservation, great write, keep penning!!!!!
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I thought it had a lot of creativity.
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I love your poem!
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a very nice piece, i love the environmental-awareness it provokes
great flow throughout!
only issue: i don't see how this ties in with the prompt of being embarrassed???!?!?!
thanks for the entry, but unfortunately i can't award you any trophies because it did not relate to the prompt.. sorry!
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Due to the requirements of this contest, I have to remove your poem because it is not a gold trophy winning poem. I'm sorry because this was a great poem. Keep up the good work. ~Des
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How very true...this is such a poem of healing.
Az
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wow this is a subject that should be more exposed to the public we are suffering from a world shortage of water especially pure drinking water...I commend you your write tells of the desperation we may feel if we allow it to go the way other extinct items/creatures on this Earth...water is our lifeblood ...an exceptional awareness write poet ...I hope you win in the competition just for your compassion for mother Earth..cause if we dont love her well ..the answer to that I'm not gonna think about ..keep up the good work poet
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This is great.
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Good
Great poem
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Fantastic
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A very good write. I like the idea of conserving water as well. I thought you portrayed that message very well. Best of luck, and thanks for entering.
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I think the members will enjoy this poem more than the others I've written.
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