Tracing the scars on my chest,
She looks at me with big blues
Tinged with red; I can't focus
On the positives,
All I see is greys and dreasen
Little Death makes life more meaningful.
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For_The_Heart_I_Once_Had_by_archania
form: Modernist Free Verse
A contest entry
- 4 winners, 20 entries, I picture that tells a thousand words by SeaWithYourHeart.
875 points, ended March 12, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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his was very deep and I'm not even awake to thinkabout it but it did so that means your poem is deffinately effective.
loved the contrast of colours and your microcosm at the end. very well done
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beautiful take on the prompt picture dear....you are very good at these...
All the very best in the contest!
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