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Moments

One day, one week,
one month, one year.
All comparrisons pale
to the moment
that made…
all of them possible.

A slapped ass
your first breath
your first moment
manifest’s a destiny
of countless moments
leeding you to…
that day!

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Prompt: One Day 40 Words

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  • karma-n-peace
    March 1
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    This is very sweet!
    Both stanzas are great, you did an awesome job with the prompt!


  • stepbystep
    March 1
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    this is,

    great.
    you are an amazing poet. keep it up!


  • blondone
    March 1

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    Lovely, full of emotions and imagery, let me say those moments move fast so cherrish them all...

    is leeding right???


  • chills gold member
    February 28
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    This is so very lovely - guess you are a very proud parent. x