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Chained

What held us together,
paper links like chain?
and strong enough to weather
not one drop of rain,

paper links like chain
falling victim to the seasons,
not one drop of rain
but a thousand different reasons.

Falling victim to the seasons
we were left weary and asunder,
but a thousand different reasons
remained chained in wonder.

We were left weary and asunder,
and strong enough to weather.
Remained chained in wonder
-what held us together.




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First attempt at pantoum, PLEASE HELP....

Any ideas to help me better this?

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