Begging for the touch of her Master
Always submissive wanting more,
He led her through the bedroom
Walking her all fours on the floor.
He pulls her collar closer to his firmness
He slaps her cheek's with its delight,
Attaching her lead to a hook
On her breasts he start's to bite.
She stands naked amongst the flickering light
Of scented candles burning,
Surrounded by the smell of sandalwood;
To be his pet she is yearning.
For total domination she craves
Releasing submissive sigh's of pleasure,
He caresses her curves smoothly
With a shiny whip of leather.
Taunting her flesh with his tongue,
Biting, pinching with his teeth,
He pulls her legs apart
Rubbing the whip between her thighs
From underneath.
Her glistening dampness adorns
The shining whip,
He runs it up past her naval
Around her nipples
Stopping at her lip,
She begs for the pleasured pain
In the master slave game
Saying she will obey
In the games they want to play.
Telling her to become feline
And arch her back real slow,
Releasing the lead gently
So her buttocks were on show,
With a confident growl
He says:
"Now here's your punishment
You know i like it when you misbehave"
As the whip burnt her skin
Whispering:
"You know i love you my sweet slave".
A contest entry
- Come Have Fun With The Bedroom Boss by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
900 points, ended March 27, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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i am crackin ^
oh maybe because i hate submissive crap every blue moon i may like it not often oh my i am mrs bedroom boss i couldn't stand for such a man breaking my rules i would have to punish him hell not him punish me crap
i like it though
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OH very nicely written Stephen
almost purrrrrrrfect
Roses to you


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My favorite lines:
Her glistening dampness adorns
The shining whip
He runs it up past her navel
Around her nipples
Stopping at her lip.
and:
"Now here's your punishment
You know I like it when you misbehave."...
"You know I love you my sweet slave."
It's an amazing erotica

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why thank-you

i'm pleased you like my poem!
can i just say that your picture is quite scintilating,
enough so i could be inspired to write another poem.hehe
Thanks Rainbow
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Don't pamper me; I might start playing with myself...lol
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Damn!! ooh keep talking to me baby, this is fun

by the way, you took the thoughts out of my head
now i am filling with heated passion but have nothing to burn. (((darn)))!
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I thought slavery was abolished Apparently the elite hasn't yet gained complete control over bedroom events. Best of luck in the contest. Take care.


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Thank-you for your comment:)
The elite has no power over immagination
yeah, i was just looking for an easy night to roll with sensation
until i noticed an aching spirit wanting free of domestication.
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