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I have never been so jealous of feathers.

 

 

Last night's history
murmured through the water,
and stained patio-stones
with secrets, while all I had
was my morning espresso.

 

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Picture Credit : markgrif - I love the picture. So very pretty

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  • snakebites
    September 2
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    i loved this, absolutely beautiful.
    i love that picture too.


  • chloris
    March 2
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    i love this really... this could easily win the gold. but hmph


  • styrofoam
    March 1
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    poetry


  • JinSays gold member
    February 28
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    ahhhhhh. . .peace.
    Lovely.
    Jin


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    February 28

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    Gorgous babe, I am left with this sudden feeling of loneliness and contentment all at once. Well done on the silver. Best to you in the contest


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 28

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    Niiice! don't ya just love ducks, I think they are awesome! and espresso to.

    Congrats on the silver hun! Woo hoo!

    Love, mj.


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 28

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!

    I could not help but just sit and look at the pic! Reminds me of my morning where I would walk, sit down with a good book and enjoy the ducks, and geese swimming in the stream nearby.


  • estbelle gold member
    February 28

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    I never tried espresso, now reading this makes me want to mine is always instant coffee.

    these are really nice images, that you could easily picture in the mind, which have a calm and serene effect...so to speak, like waking up on the right side of the bed, thanks for the read belle

    ps, Congrats on the Silver


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    February 28

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    You know I think I might just give up entering quickies when you do

    Lovely, I love your take ^^


    p.s -- bet you get silver or gold


  • Cannonsfire
    February 28

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    Oh he will love this cos it mentions coffee He's addicted lol Good luck C


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 28

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    Darn. you think you should be writing about coffee at this time? lol

    This is lovely.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 28
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 28

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    Great work with the prompt my friend!
    All the best to you in this contest!
    Take care.




    Jeremy0826

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