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This Day



Golden orb shines upon
tender lips just opening.

With the soft tears
from the night before fading.

Petals open up
bathe in sunlight.

Fragrance lifted
for all to inhale.

The buzz of bumblebees
fills air with only sound.



Author notes


What I was seeing was
a flower opening up
with dew upon it
as the sun shines.

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  • Daizee silver member
    February 28
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    So soft and lovely.

    Love,
    Stacy


  • hawkeslake gold member
    February 28

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    Magic, just plain magic! I could see and smell the flower as I read your words. Big sigh... very fine read.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 28

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    Lovely imagery and metaphor...you painted such a beautiful and creative picture with your words...nicely done.

    Best,
    mystic