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I Am Strong

Why do I love you
When it's not right?
Why do I love you
When all we do is fight?

You tell me to leave,
You beg me to stay.
Make up your mind,
Don't beg me one more day.

One day you'll see
That you were wrong,
One day you'll see
That I am strong.

Your world will end,
Your games will stop.
My love for you will vanish
Without a second thought.

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  • xXx.Clary.xXx
    September 13, 2009
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    Who is this about-eth? It was really good


  • DelaneyDisaster
    February 28, 2009

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    Very good. It reminds me a lot how i used to write. Relationships are horrible sometimes. You don't need someone if they do that to you. Good job.