Touch

Stomach tightens which each tickling flutter
Sensitivity is hightend by your electric fingers
My heart dances on my tounge twisting my words
Hiding from reasoning and searching for control.

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Classic Crayons
March 15

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I enjoyed this immensely. I feel almost as if flashbacks are a breath away. it was short and wonderful. Sorry for my short comments but I fear at this time I do not feel very veracious. thank you for writing.
- karma-n-peace
  March 15
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  Please do not apologize! Your comments are not short and each one of them have made my day
thepoetssoul
March 5

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Wow those must be some really electric fingers
Great imagery and creativity put into this poem.
Splendidly done indeed.
Best to you in all you do.

Tony
- karma-n-peace
  March 5
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  Thanks A memory of once upon a time...
SoulWhispher
February 28

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Wow
This is such a magnificant poem on touch, both sensual and tastefull, you have really penned a magical and true poetic massterpiece, fantastic job, blessing with love John
- karma-n-peace
  February 28
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  Thanx Trying to step out of the box
- - SoulWhispher
    February 28
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    Well you have stepped outside the box,
Puppydog
February 28

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SO TENDER AND PASSIONATE!!!!
That is really how it is as one who you love so much touches you! It makes one all tongue-tied and sweaty.
- karma-n-peace
  February 28
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  Thank you, This was a 3 am hurry up and get it on paper write LOL...