Viewed from front you are ravishing
From rear?
Devastating!
A contest entry
- within 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 28, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is interesting.The rear always lacks cosmetics.
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Well ...
come as you go, let all be shown!
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wow
tis was in intense three lner.You left the object choice open..though many minds would assume it...as...you know what...thats why the poem becomes profound.Good work here. have very simiplar sounding poems on my page...please visit may be you can see and derive more soul comfort. -
This reminds me of several lady friends of mine. You should never judge a ship from its appearance at the forecastle. It could very well have a very tastty stern indeed.
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LOL. funny how some people have a "better" side to them
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wow what a harsh last statement... but very nicely done. Keep up the great work kahy
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well executed
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The word poem needs to be redefined
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uniquely taken.... x
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