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Please forgive me

I smell his cologne
I see his face smiling down at me
with that hypnotic look in his eyes
I feel his hands caressing my thighs
I taste his mouth so sweet
I hear his voice
And though you're here with me
I wanna be with him
Please forgive me

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  • Qjones22
    September 22

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    =p

    I think that in the poem you are with someone but you have someone else in mind. I think that this might be the best poem that I read so far. Its short and sweet and right to the point. Great!!!


  • Palas Kumar Ray
    July 9
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    Very honest

    Take care.


  • purplemoon
    March 3

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    A very understandable poem I've felt this way before. This is a very nice poem. I like the way it express everything in just 9 lines.Bravo and Well written.