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The Jacket of Erogenous

Me I am just a man
And the skin of human being
Desires lust in all of us
Yet we refuse our mind endorphins
and become enigma mortals

Dont yah just wish for once
You could break out
and wear the Jacket
and touch the forbidden

But I am just a man
Emotions bleed on my shoulder
Life creeps up on me
and age is getting bolder

I need to wear my suit of imagination
For tonight I will go to the Carnival
I have my tickets purchased on the net
And my friend Erogenous is going with me

Can I wear your Jacket friend?

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  • LordNightAngel
    March 4, 2009

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    An expressive write about the battle within man's mind of soft or hard. Love and hate. It seems to portray the ID versus Ego of all man. It is a great piece with wonderful imagery. Good Luck in the contest.


  • sheltered gold member
    February 28, 2009
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    definitely outside
    and maybe too far gone
    but risk