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Icy boughs of whited greens and frozen sorts of things,
with winter's lace upon the place,
the air dances softly with laughter...
Crisp, backdropping sky and in great awe am I
the pearly blue that's shining through the mists
and rejoices the wispy clouds long after...
Bright peaking through this awesome sight, there sneaks the golden light
that melts the frost upon the green and all the other things,
and the breeze flows ever softer...
Peaceful songs of winter's grace lie tiptoed in the lace,
and I am glad to still be here, there's nothing i should fear,
Because this, is my Lord's love letter. . .
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Written February 22nd, 2004
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A contest entry
- Imagery!! by --Blue--.
315 points, ended July 16, 2004, 24 entries
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very nice
Nice work here. I liked this one. You described everything in a unique and beautiful way! Thanks a lot for entering!!
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This is really wonderful. I'm there with you, loving it, loving Him! Beautifully described with a bursting heart - the way it should be. You are a true Psalmist. Thanks for your comment on 'Selfseeking' - you're the only one who's known what I'm on about!
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Wonderful!
Wow, Awesome awesome work, I especially like the last line
and this, is my Lord's love letter. . .
Because it's so true, God's creation is so amazing.. It felt like I was out walking in the snow again. Great imagery. I'm loving your works!
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Yay!!! You did great!!!
Yay, Ash!!! This is a beautiful work!! Wow, you totally described everything perfectly. Brilliant, I say, brilliant. It's so true, everywhere you look, there's evidence of God, our love letter from Him. I especially liked the part about "Bright peaking through this awesome sight, there sneaks the golden light" That was genius! In fact, the whole thing is genius! Excellent, my friend! I know I've said it a thousand times before, but you are such a great writer! I wish I could write like you! Oh, well. I can do my best. God bless you Ashy!!! :-D
Your friend forever, and sis in Christ,
~Anna -
Yay!!! You did great!!!
Yay, Ash!!! This is a beautiful work!! Wow, you totally described everything perfectly. Brilliant, I say, brilliant. It's so true, everywhere you look, there's evidence of God, our love letter from Him. I especially liked the part about "Bright peaking through this awesome sight, there sneaks the golden light" That was genius! In fact, the whole thing is genius! Excellent, my friend! I know I've said it a thousand times before, but you are such a great writer! I wish I could write like you! Oh, well. I can do my best. God bless you Ashy!!! :-D
Your friend forever, and sis in Christ,
~Anna -
Hey Ash,
Isn't God's love for us great. Everything we see around us is like our own personal "love letter" from God. You did a great job painting a picture here with your words for all of us to see. I hope that everyone who reads this will take the time to stop and see God's love letter to them.
your bro,
Matt
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