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Beaches and bastards

Sandy beaches, crashing waves,
I want to take her home.
Though her heart, to him still slaves,
She craves the ocean foam.
Coastal waters for her healing days,
To be happy though alone.
Her second love her soul would save,
His betrayal atone.

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